serverguide: errors in the windows-networking document

Bug #462607 reported by Gabor Kelemen on 2009-10-28
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Affects Status Importance Assigned to Milestone
ubuntu-docs (Ubuntu)
Low
Vikram Dhillon

Bug Description

Binary package hint: ubuntu-docs

While translating, I found the following problematic strings:

https://help.ubuntu.com/9.04/serverguide/C/samba-ad-integration.html
#: serverguide/C/windows-networking.xml:1104(para)
Once part of the domain, install the following packages:

sudo apt-get install samba smbfs smbclient

This should say something like "Once part of the domain, enter the following command in the terminal prompt:", just like in other places.

https://help.ubuntu.com/9.04/serverguide/C/likewise-open.html
#: serverguide/C/windows-networking.xml:1489(para)
In order to join the domain the "mdns4" entry from the hosts option.

This sentence lacks something. Perhaps:
"In order to join the domain the "mdns4" entry should be removed from the hosts option."

#: serverguide/C/windows-networking.xml:1532(para)
Click Start ▸ Administrative Tools ▸ Manager Your Server.
This will open the Server Role Mangement utility.

I don't have an english Windows, but it's almost certain that this is called "Manage Your Server".

#: serverguide/C/windows-networking.xml:1540(para)
Click Add or remove a role

The "Add or remove a role" should be emphasized, as guilabel

#: serverguide/C/windows-networking.xml:1544(para)
Next

The previous step was Click Next, perhaps this could be "Click Next again" to be clearer.

#: serverguide/C/windows-networking.xml:1549(para)
#: serverguide/C/windows-networking.xml:1550(para)
Click Next to \"Allow only secure dynamic updates\"

We have the same sentence twice, this does not make much sense to me...

Furthermore, this "Microsoft DNS" section contains lots of strings, that describe the UI on Windows. For consistency reasons, I'd like to see the following comment before these strings:

Translators: please check http://www.microsoft.com/language/en/us/search.mspx to see how this string is translated in Windows to your language

And the particular strings:

Click Start → Administrative Tools → Manager Your Server.
Click Add or remove a role
Select "DNS Server"
Select "Create a forward lookup zone" if it is not selected.
Make sure "This server maintains the zone" is selected and click Next.
Click Next to "Allow only secure dynamic updates"
Enter the IP for DNS servers to forward queries to, or Select "No, it should not forward queries" and click Next.
Right Click "Local Area Connection"
Double click "Internet Protocol (TCP/IP)"
Enter the Server's IP Address as the "Preferred DNS server"

Vikram Dhillon (dhillon-v10) wrote :

These changes can be made easily in the docs. and it would also aid the translation I will go ahead and make the changes and will provide a patch really soon

Changed in ubuntu-docs (Ubuntu):
assignee: nobody → Vikram (dhillon-v10)
status: New → In Progress
Connor Imes (ckimes) on 2009-12-15
Changed in ubuntu-docs (Ubuntu):
importance: Undecided → Low
Vikram Dhillon (dhillon-v10) wrote :

Alright the changes that you suggested have been made and I am attaching a patch file. Now let's wait and see what changes Matthew and others approve :D

Connor Imes (ckimes) wrote :

Vikram, can you please post a patch generated by bzr rather than diff? From the top level, simply run something like:
   bzr diff > ~/windows-networking.patch
and that will provide us with a patch I can apply to the branch. Thanks!

Vikram Dhillon (dhillon-v10) wrote :

Alright, I am attaching a .diff that can be applied to a branch :D

Connor Imes (ckimes) wrote :

Vikram, thanks for the patch. It looks good, so I applied it to the Lucid dev branch, rev 407. I fixed some spacing issues in one part. For some reason the bzr patch you posted was inverted, I'm not sure what you did to generate that, but it wasn't a big problem, it just took me a few minutes to figure out what was going on. Cheers.

Changed in ubuntu-docs (Ubuntu):
status: In Progress → Fix Committed
Launchpad Janitor (janitor) wrote :
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This bug was fixed in the package ubuntu-docs - 10.04.1

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ubuntu-docs (10.04.1) lucid; urgency=low

  * First upload for lucid
  * General:
    - Refresh pot files
    - Changed 'Text Editor' to 'gedit Text Editor' LP: #442417 (Connor Imes)
  * Advanced-topics:
    - Added link in advanced-topics to a description about Users and Groups in
      Debian systems. LP: #145055 (Connor Imes)
  * Hardware:
    - Added mention of ext4 to hardware.xml and changed the mentioning of the
      default filesystem in Ubuntu from ext3 to ext4 LP #449667 (Connor Imes)
    - Removed subsection in hardware about quirk-checker script - link was
      broken, script is outdated LP: #461158 (Connor Imes)
  * Keeping-safe:
    - Updating instructions for automatic login for new GDM LP: #442676
     (Dean Sas)
    - String adjustment (period inside of a quote tag), Scott Shields,
      LP: #496885
  * Internet:
    - Changes remaining mention of flashplugin-nonfree to flashplugin-installer
      in web-apps.xml LP: #444546 (Connor Imes)
    - Change some <guimenu> tags to <guimenuitem> tags in web-apps.xml to show
      arrows in HTML documentation instead of + signs LP: #453512 (Connor Imes)
    - Removed reference to network-manager radio buttons, as radio buttons
      aren't used in this version of NM for wired networks (Jim Campbell)
    - Aligned similar strings in 'internet' section to benefit translators;
      some small adjustments. LP: #460360 (Connor Imes)
  * Musicvideophotos:
    - Fixed apturl for mtp-tools package in music.xml LP #452262 (Connor Imes)
    - Improve ipod section, patch by Michael Fitzhugh. LP: #370085
  * Printing:
    - Updated printer setup directions in printing section LP: #435510
      (Connor Imes)
    - Fix scanning typo. Patch by Shane Fagan LP: #447250
  * Programming:
    - Removed entire programming section LP: #414035 (Connor Imes)
  * Serverguide:
    - Adjusted wording in serverguide package-management file to more
      clearly describe apticron. LP: #473280 (Connor Imes)
    - Updated LDAP section for changes to the Jaunty package.
      Fixes LP: #475492, LP: #459403, LP: #463684 (Adam Sommer)
    - In OpenSSH section, .ssh/authorized_keys permissions should be
      600, not 644 LP: #491159 (Connor Imes)
    - Replaced description of ebox Log Observer in serverguide with a real
      description of the event's purpose LP: #405926 (Connor Imes)
    - Fixed IP example in serverguide's postfix configuration section
      LP: #495202 (Connor Imes)
    - Include 'auto eth1' in interfaces file for static IP configuration
      LP: #441802 (Connor Imes)
    - Fix for disabling Control-Alt-Delete in serverguide. Scott Shields,
      LP: #496465
    - Typo fix, Scott Shields, LP: #497867
    - PostgreSQL setup fix for config file pg_hba.conf, Scott Shields,
      LP: #492286
    - Misc fixes in windows-networking section. Vikram Dhillon, LP: #462607
    - Changes to RAID installation section LP: #428036, LP: #462719
      (Connor Imes)
    - Fixes and adjustments to web-servers LP: #462621 (Connor Imes)
  * Switching:
    - Replaced Pidgin with Empathy in applications-equivalents
      LP: #490980 (Connor Ime...

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Changed in ubuntu-docs (Ubuntu):
status: Fix Committed → Fix Released
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