The newly proposed documentation is almost perfect.
In my view, there is only one more aspect that could be improved: The term "mount-point" emphasizes the mounting application while the proposal puts the mounted object in the first place. I therefore suggest to slightly modify the first paragraph to: "The mount point is a slash-separated path to a 'Products.ZODBMountPoint.Mount.MountPoint' instance in Zope. If such an instance exists, it can mount an object (the mounted object) into Zope. By default, this object is located by the same path. ...."
The newly proposed documentation is almost perfect.
In my view, there is only one more aspect that could be improved: The term "mount-point" emphasizes the mounting application while the proposal puts the mounted object in the first place. I therefore suggest to slightly modify the first paragraph to: "The mount point is a slash-separated path to a 'Products. ZODBMountPoint. Mount.MountPoin t' instance in Zope. If such an instance exists, it can mount an object (the mounted object) into Zope. By default, this object is located by the same path. ...."