Comment 15 for bug 460039
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| buurd (roland-javalia) wrote ☀Samsung's latest app livestreams your mobile gameplay | #15 |
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Yo!
Even with the advent of Twitch, broadcasting mobile gameplay footage has been finicky for awhile. http://
Sent from my iPhone, April Trent
From: Bug 460039 [mailto:<email address hidden>]
Sent: Sunday, July 16, 2017 9:34 AM
To: <email address hidden>
Subject: So, what, about 4 ft 8?
It's not hard. Fix your punctuation first, use proper capitalization at the start of sentences, spaces after(and not before) commas and full stops.
Even for people who don't mention it explicitly, bad grammar does create a bias against you and people are less likely to take you seriously.
I'm not going to nitpick on specific grammar mistakes, but reading will help a lot. You don't need to be interested in literature as such. Even reading news articles and adopting their style will help.