Comment 2 for bug 223382

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FactTech (launchpad-facttechnologies) wrote :

This document contains additional errors on the second page:

* "productivity tools for word procession" -> "productivity tools for word processing"
* "As well as trouble-free web surfing." is a fragment, should be attached to previous sentence.

The document could probably use a bit of copy-editing for a more professional presentation.