Great work, Joseph. The colours and theming generally feels more Ubuntu-y.
Here's a few thoughts I had when looking at the diagrams: first up I feel the lines and text could be a bit thinner. Also the twisted arrows seem to make what they try to explain more of a puzzle than a logical progression through defined steps from A to B.
Great work, Joseph. The colours and theming generally feels more Ubuntu-y.
Here's a few thoughts I had when looking at the diagrams: first up I feel the lines and text could be a bit thinner. Also the twisted arrows seem to make what they try to explain more of a puzzle than a logical progression through defined steps from A to B.
Does anyone else have some ideas about this?