Activity log for bug #1447759

Date Who What changed Old value New value Message
2015-04-23 18:36:33 Shellee Aragon bug added bug
2015-04-23 18:36:51 Shellee Aragon tags sec-guide
2015-04-23 18:38:11 Shellee Aragon summary Networking services in OpenStack Security Guide  - Incomplete Sentence Networking services in OpenStack Security Guide  - Incomplete Sentences
2015-04-23 18:38:52 Shellee Aragon description The 1st sentence below appears to be incomplete, therefore it should either be rewritten to complete the sentence or be concatenated with the sentence following directly after: By default, the DHCP and L3 agents use Linux network namespaces. However, if the host does not support these namespaces, run the DHCP and L3 agents on different hosts. ----------------------------------- Built: 2015-04-23T03:51:33 00:00 git SHA: 503993fc9e08c5e8014c468d94f47547549dd7a6 URL: http://docs.openstack.org/security-guide/content/networking-services.html source File: file:/home/jenkins/workspace/security-doc-tox-doc-publishdocs/security-guide/section_networking-services.xml xml:id: networking-services In both of the examples below the 1st sentence below appears to be incomplete, therefore it should either be rewritten to complete the sentence or be concatenated with the sentence following directly after: 1. By default, the DHCP and L3 agents use Linux network namespaces. However, if the host does not support these namespaces, run the DHCP and L3 agents on different hosts. 2. OpenStack Networking supports multiple L3 and DHCP agents with load balancing. However, tight coupling of the location of the virtual machine is not supported. ----------------------------------- Built: 2015-04-23T03:51:33 00:00 git SHA: 503993fc9e08c5e8014c468d94f47547549dd7a6 URL: http://docs.openstack.org/security-guide/content/networking-services.html source File: file:/home/jenkins/workspace/security-doc-tox-doc-publishdocs/security-guide/section_networking-services.xml xml:id: networking-services
2015-04-23 19:40:52 Andreas Jaeger openstack-manuals: status New Confirmed
2015-04-23 19:41:25 Andreas Jaeger openstack-manuals: status Confirmed Incomplete
2015-04-27 17:26:00 Shellee Aragon description In both of the examples below the 1st sentence below appears to be incomplete, therefore it should either be rewritten to complete the sentence or be concatenated with the sentence following directly after: 1. By default, the DHCP and L3 agents use Linux network namespaces. However, if the host does not support these namespaces, run the DHCP and L3 agents on different hosts. 2. OpenStack Networking supports multiple L3 and DHCP agents with load balancing. However, tight coupling of the location of the virtual machine is not supported. ----------------------------------- Built: 2015-04-23T03:51:33 00:00 git SHA: 503993fc9e08c5e8014c468d94f47547549dd7a6 URL: http://docs.openstack.org/security-guide/content/networking-services.html source File: file:/home/jenkins/workspace/security-doc-tox-doc-publishdocs/security-guide/section_networking-services.xml xml:id: networking-services The sentences below should be re-written for clarity as they appear to be lacking critical information. 1. By default, the DHCP and L3 agents use Linux network namespaces. However, if the host does not support these namespaces, run the DHCP and L3 agents on different hosts. 2. OpenStack Networking supports multiple L3 and DHCP agents with load balancing. However, tight coupling of the location of the virtual machine is not supported. ----------------------------------- Built: 2015-04-23T03:51:33 00:00 git SHA: 503993fc9e08c5e8014c468d94f47547549dd7a6 URL: http://docs.openstack.org/security-guide/content/networking-services.html source File: file:/home/jenkins/workspace/security-doc-tox-doc-publishdocs/security-guide/section_networking-services.xml xml:id: networking-services
2015-04-27 17:28:00 Shellee Aragon summary Networking services in OpenStack Security Guide  - Incomplete Sentences Networking services in OpenStack Security Guide  - Rewrite for clarity
2015-05-11 17:08:43 N Dillon openstack-manuals: importance Undecided Medium
2015-05-11 17:08:43 N Dillon openstack-manuals: status Incomplete Triaged
2015-08-11 17:26:48 Arvind Somya openstack-manuals: assignee Arvind Somya (asomya)
2015-08-11 18:12:10 OpenStack Infra openstack-manuals: status Triaged In Progress
2015-08-12 15:13:05 OpenStack Infra openstack-manuals: status In Progress Fix Released