Networking services in OpenStack Security Guide  - Rewrite for clarity

Bug #1447759 reported by Shellee Aragon
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This bug affects 1 person
Affects Status Importance Assigned to Milestone
openstack-manuals
Fix Released
Medium
Arvind Somya

Bug Description

The sentences below should be re-written for clarity as they appear to be lacking critical information.

1. By default, the DHCP and L3 agents use Linux network namespaces. However, if the host does not support these namespaces, run the DHCP and L3 agents on different hosts.

2. OpenStack Networking supports multiple L3 and DHCP agents with load balancing. However, tight coupling of the location of the virtual machine is not supported.

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Built: 2015-04-23T03:51:33 00:00
git SHA: 503993fc9e08c5e8014c468d94f47547549dd7a6
URL: http://docs.openstack.org/security-guide/content/networking-services.html
source File: file:/home/jenkins/workspace/security-doc-tox-doc-publishdocs/security-guide/section_networking-services.xml
xml:id: networking-services

Tags: sec-guide
tags: added: sec-guide
summary: - Networking services in OpenStack Security Guide  - Incomplete Sentence
+ Networking services in OpenStack Security Guide  - Incomplete Sentences
description: updated
Revision history for this message
Andreas Jaeger (jaegerandi) wrote : Re: Networking services in OpenStack Security Guide  - Incomplete Sentences

Why are these sentences incomplete?

Changed in openstack-manuals:
status: New → Confirmed
status: Confirmed → Incomplete
description: updated
summary: - Networking services in OpenStack Security Guide  - Incomplete Sentences
+ Networking services in OpenStack Security Guide  - Rewrite for clarity
N Dillon (sicarie)
Changed in openstack-manuals:
importance: Undecided → Medium
status: Incomplete → Triaged
Arvind Somya (asomya)
Changed in openstack-manuals:
assignee: nobody → Arvind Somya (asomya)
Revision history for this message
OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack) wrote : Fix proposed to security-doc (master)

Fix proposed to branch: master
Review: https://review.openstack.org/211699

Changed in openstack-manuals:
status: Triaged → In Progress
Revision history for this message
OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack) wrote : Fix merged to security-doc (master)

Reviewed: https://review.openstack.org/211699
Committed: https://git.openstack.org/cgit/openstack/security-doc/commit/?id=1e4cb1ae2770fd89d74adcdc1151d8adb1ae56bc
Submitter: Jenkins
Branch: master

commit 1e4cb1ae2770fd89d74adcdc1151d8adb1ae56bc
Author: Arvind Somya <email address hidden>
Date: Tue Aug 11 06:33:04 2015 -0400

    Networking services in OpenStack Security Guide - Rewrite for clarity

    Rewrite some sections of the Network services page for clarity.

    Fixes bug #1447759

    Change-Id: I4720c03b035062d89e18a0921e2d0eed49a0e06f

Changed in openstack-manuals:
status: In Progress → Fix Released
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