openstack-manuals

  1. Bug #1344374
  2. Comment #2

Comment 2 for bug 1344374

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OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack) wrote : Fix merged to security-doc (master)

Reviewed: https://review.openstack.org/108855
Committed: https://git.openstack.org/cgit/openstack/security-doc/commit/?id=3c106fb7496772d6aa65c9f5fff22c05e167e334
Submitter: Jenkins
Branch: master

commit 3c106fb7496772d6aa65c9f5fff22c05e167e334
Author: Dan Sneddon <email address hidden>
Date: Tue Jul 22 18:09:24 2014 -0400

    Cleaning up grammer and wording, avoiding 2nd person

    Updating description of encrypted live migration process to avoid 2nd person
    perspective, cleaning up grammer and wording to improve clarity.

    Change-Id: Ibf0cfac2a4f6c592269c5921397aa3a70c1db4ab
    Closes-Bug: #1344374