I don't think zoom in and out belong in the AppMenu. These are contextual actions based on the current tab, not the application. So the context menu of that view is where they should live.
Having said that, I more or less agree with most of your suggestions. I'm especially keen on the string changes from "Private Browsing" to "New Private Browsing Window", "Find In Page...", proper use of elipses etc. Nice work.
I don't think zoom in and out belong in the AppMenu. These are contextual actions based on the current tab, not the application. So the context menu of that view is where they should live.
Having said that, I more or less agree with most of your suggestions. I'm especially keen on the string changes from "Private Browsing" to "New Private Browsing Window", "Find In Page...", proper use of elipses etc. Nice work.