Comments on the impact statement in comment #12:
change "revocations events" to "revocation events" (remove s, this is at the beginning and at the end of the text)
change "that Mysql token" to "that the MySQL token" (add the)
change "expiration date incorrectly" to "expiration dates incorrectly" (add s)
change "which prevent manual" to "which prevents manual" (add s)
change "those bug may" to "these bugs may"
Comments on the impact statement in comment #12:
change "revocations events" to "revocation events" (remove s, this is at the beginning and at the end of the text)
change "that Mysql token" to "that the MySQL token" (add the)
change "expiration date incorrectly" to "expiration dates incorrectly" (add s)
change "which prevent manual" to "which prevents manual" (add s)
change "those bug may" to "these bugs may"