Spelling Error in Control File Description

Bug #858631 reported by Paul Stewart
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Affects Status Importance Assigned to Milestone
One Hundred Papercuts
Fix Released
Low
Unassigned
sauerbraten (Debian)
New
Undecided
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sauerbraten (Ubuntu)
Fix Released
Undecided
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Bug Description

Open the software-center and search sauerbraten
Click on the 'More Info' button

There needs to be some commas in the first sentence. For example, "Sauerbraten is a networked, fast-paced, 3D, first-person shooter game."
Also, in my opinion, the word 'rather' is not needed in the second sentence.
In the second sentence the letter 'a' should not be before the word 'some'.

ProblemType: Bug
DistroRelease: Ubuntu 11.10
Package: sauerbraten 0.0.20100728.dfsg+repack-3
ProcVersionSignature: Ubuntu 3.0.0-11.18-generic 3.0.4
Uname: Linux 3.0.0-11-generic i686
ApportVersion: 1.23-0ubuntu1
Architecture: i386
Date: Sat Sep 24 20:56:27 2011
ProcEnviron:
 PATH=(custom, no user)
 LANG=en_US.UTF-8
 SHELL=/bin/bash
SourcePackage: sauerbraten
UpgradeStatus: No upgrade log present (probably fresh install)

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Paul Stewart (paulbrianstewart) wrote :
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Ubuntu Foundations Team Bug Bot (crichton) wrote :

The attachment "Control File Patch" of this bug report has been identified as being a patch. The ubuntu-reviewers team has been subscribed to the bug report so that they can review the patch. In the event that this is in fact not a patch you can resolve this situation by removing the tag 'patch' from the bug report and editing the attachment so that it is not flagged as a patch. Additionally, if you are member of the ubuntu-sponsors please also unsubscribe the team from this bug report.

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tags: added: patch
Changed in hundredpapercuts:
milestone: none → precise-8-softwarecenter-app-descriptions
Changed in hundredpapercuts:
importance: Undecided → Low
Changed in hundredpapercuts:
status: New → Confirmed
Changed in hundredpapercuts:
milestone: precise-8-softwarecenter-app-descriptions → quantal-3-software-centre-app-metadata
Don Han (sdhaan8)
Changed in hundredpapercuts:
assignee: nobody → Don Han (sdhaan8)
assignee: Don Han (sdhaan8) → nobody
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Launchpad Janitor (janitor) wrote :

This bug was fixed in the package sauerbraten - 0.0.20130203.dfsg-1

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sauerbraten (0.0.20130203.dfsg-1) unstable; urgency=medium

  * Team upload.
    - Add myself to Uploaders.
  * New upstream release. (Closes: #732988, #699521)
    - Refresh patches.
  * Build using dh-autoreconf.
  * Fix minor grammatical errors in package description. (LP: #858631)
  * Update Standards version to 3.9.5.

 -- Vincent Cheng <email address hidden> Tue, 21 Jan 2014 15:59:05 -0800

Changed in sauerbraten (Ubuntu):
status: New → Fix Released
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Paul White (paulw2u) wrote :

Closing Papercuts task as Ubuntu task was fixed over 5 years ago.

Changed in hundredpapercuts:
status: Confirmed → Fix Released
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