Remove passive voice such as "it is recommended" from Arch Design Guide; replace with "We recommend" and so on

[Anne Gentle]

Would appreciate a clean-through of the Architecture Design Guide to eliminate passive voice.

[Anne Gentle (annegentle)]

Alex, feel free to assign yourself if you like.

[Alexandra Settle (alexandra-settle)]

Hi Anne,

That sounds good, I might just do that. Thanks for opening this up!

On 27/09/2014 1:11 pm, "Anne Gentle" <email address hidden> wrote:

>Alex, feel free to assign yourself if you like.
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>https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/1374813
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>Title:
> Remove passive voice such as "it is recommended" from Arch Design
> Guide; replace with "We recommend" and so on
>
>Status in OpenStack Manuals:
> Confirmed
>
>Bug description:
> Would appreciate a clean-through of the Architecture Design Guide to
> eliminate passive voice.
>
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[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

Fix proposed to branch: master
Review: https://review.openstack.org/127886

[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

Fix proposed to branch: master
Review: https://review.openstack.org/127932

[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

Reviewed: https://review.openstack.org/127932
Committed: https://git.openstack.org/cgit/openstack/openstack-manuals/commit/?id=aebcf404e18fbd7404a4cadf87c8e5ef18ec18d2
Submitter: Jenkins
Branch: master

commit aebcf404e18fbd7404a4cadf87c8e5ef18ec18d2
Author: Dominique Williams <email address hidden>
Date: Mon Oct 13 07:13:45 2014 -0400

    Removal of passive voice from ArchDesign Guide

    Removed passive voice from Compute Focus Section. Made additional edit on
    line 348 to remove passive voice that I missed in initial patch.

    **This task is part of the Outreach Program for Women**

    Change-Id: Ie3594285987e9118958827d3b192190627f99638
    Partial-Bug: #1374813

[Alexandra Settle (alexandra-settle)]

Andreas did you want to work on this bug? It was mine originally, passed onto a potential intern. If you don't want it, I'd be keen to have it back :)

[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

Reviewed: https://review.openstack.org/127886
Committed: https://git.openstack.org/cgit/openstack/openstack-manuals/commit/?id=90fc37dede95604790f5770cffc524e49938a103
Submitter: Jenkins
Branch: master

commit 90fc37dede95604790f5770cffc524e49938a103
Author: Ana Carolina Comandulli <email address hidden>
Date: Sun Oct 12 23:09:23 2014 -0700

    Removal of passive voice

    **This task is part of the FOSS Outreach Program**

    Change-Id: Iaeb5facbb3c8a7c120a02896dd0d7ab65f15cb07
    Partial-Bug: #1374813

[Andreas Jaeger (jaegerandi)]

Lexi, it was assigned to me since I updated an old patch to get it finally in. You can finish it ;)

[Alexandra Settle (alexandra-settle)]

Thanks! :)

[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

Fix proposed to branch: master
Review: https://review.openstack.org/139906

[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

Reviewed: https://review.openstack.org/139906
Committed: https://git.openstack.org/cgit/openstack/openstack-manuals/commit/?id=c76361ceb608301465c1aa4c3b00f61bca3de4a7
Submitter: Jenkins
Branch: master

commit c76361ceb608301465c1aa4c3b00f61bca3de4a7
Author: Alexandra Settle <email address hidden>
Date: Mon Dec 8 15:00:55 2014 +1000

    Removed instances of 'it is recommended'

    Replaced instances of 'it is recommended' with
    'we recommend'

    Change-Id: I1e630a3f6b066ca3f3800839f4267c99af7026a7
    Closes-bug: #1374813

[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

This issue was fixed in the openstack/openstack-manuals 15.0.0 release.