[oobe] Fix a string in the welcome wizard

[Michał Karnicki]

"Use your mobile network and Wi-Fi to work out where you are"
  should probably be:
"Use your mobile network and Wi-Fi to determine your location"

I'm not a native speaker, but other folks agree "work out" is slightly out of place and doesn't fit that sentence well.

Question - did we get someone from design to proof read the contents of the welcome wizard?

Thanks!

[Pat McGowan (pat-mcgowan)]

I agree this is not normal phrasing, definitely prefer "determine" over "work out"

[Olga Kemmet (olga-kemmet)]

The copy document was mended, the screen design will be updated soon.

[Sebastien Bacher (seb128)]

Olga, do you have an url pointer to the design document?

[Olga Kemmet (olga-kemmet)]

Yes, I do. But it looks like the document isn't completed.
Here it is:
https://docs.google.com/a/canonical.com/document/d/12sLc0ClVx6W39meDx72xyFgGcCoU8PtT5y8OPpWgwyQ/edit

Hope it helps.

On Thu, Sep 11, 2014 at 10:36 AM, Sebastien Bacher <email address hidden>
wrote:

> Olga, do you have an url pointer to the design document?
>
> --
> You received this bug notification because you are a bug assignee.
> https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/1365034
>
> Title:
> Fix a string in the welcome wizard
>
> Status in Ubuntu UX bugs:
> Fix Committed
> Status in “ubuntu-system-settings” package in Ubuntu:
> Confirmed
>
> Bug description:
> "Use your mobile network and Wi-Fi to work out where you are"
> should probably be:
> "Use your mobile network and Wi-Fi to determine your location"
>
> I'm not a native speaker, but other folks agree "work out" is slightly
> out of place and doesn't fit that sentence well.
>
> Question - did we get someone from design to proof read the contents
> of the welcome wizard?
>
> Thanks!
>
> To manage notifications about this bug go to:
> https://bugs.launchpad.net/ubuntu-ux/+bug/1365034/+subscriptions
>

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*Olga Kemmet*
User Experience Designer
Product Strategy | Apps
ubuntu.com | canonical.com
London, UK

[Launchpad Janitor (janitor)]

This bug was fixed in the package ubuntu-system-settings - 0.3+14.10.20141010-0ubuntu1

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ubuntu-system-settings (0.3+14.10.20141010-0ubuntu1) utopic; urgency=low

  [ Michael Terry ]
  * Complete the unlock security screens and update a host of other
    small design issues. (LP: #1365034, LP: #1348362) (LP: #1365034,
    #1348362)
 -- Ubuntu daily release <email address hidden> Fri, 10 Oct 2014 18:02:19 +0000