accounts-create.page simplify a phrase
Bug #1220971 reported by
John Kim
This bug affects 1 person
Affects | Status | Importance | Assigned to | Milestone | |
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ubuntu-docs (Ubuntu) |
Fix Released
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Low
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Little Girl |
Bug Description
There is the note under Step #5:
"...If this is true of the service you wish to register, you will need to use an alternative method to create an account."
s/is true of/applies to
Sounds more direct that way.
Another one.
"You will typically be asked for some personal details such as username and password."
Suggestion: You will be asked for your username and password.
Conciseness.
Changed in ubuntu-docs (Ubuntu): | |
status: | New → Confirmed |
tags: | added: trusty |
Changed in ubuntu-docs (Ubuntu): | |
assignee: | nobody → Little Girl (littlergirl) |
importance: | Undecided → Low |
milestone: | none → ubuntu-14.04 |
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Both changes have been made. Thanks for reporting this!