simplify a phrase

Bug #1220971 reported by John Kim on 2013-09-05
This bug affects 1 person
Affects Status Importance Assigned to Milestone
ubuntu-docs (Ubuntu)
Little Girl

Bug Description

There is the note under Step #5:

"...If this is true of the service you wish to register, you will need to use an alternative method to create an account."
s/is true of/applies to
Sounds more direct that way.

Another one.

"You will typically be asked for some personal details such as username and password."
Suggestion: You will be asked for your username and password.

Changed in ubuntu-docs (Ubuntu):
status: New → Confirmed
tags: added: trusty
Changed in ubuntu-docs (Ubuntu):
assignee: nobody → Little Girl (littlergirl)
importance: Undecided → Low
milestone: none → ubuntu-14.04
Little Girl (littlergirl) wrote :

Both changes have been made. Thanks for reporting this!

Changed in ubuntu-docs (Ubuntu):
status: Confirmed → Fix Committed
Greg Beam (ki7mt) wrote :

For Trusty 1.04

I re-worked the account,,,.page files over the last few days. .. and .. were duplicates. is being removed in a merge proposal.

Launchpad Janitor (janitor) wrote :

This bug was fixed in the package ubuntu-docs - 14.04.1

ubuntu-docs (14.04.1) trusty; urgency=low

  [ Kevin Godby ]
  *, html/Makefile, html/ubuntu.xsl,
    - Bumped version number to 14.04.
  * Typo on fixed (LP: #1231655).

  [ Little Girl ]
  * ubuntu-help/C/
    - Added the EXTINCT listing for status to display references to
      previous releases.
    - Added a section on how to use status tags.
    - Fixed the script so that it will find revision elements with stub
    - Improved wording (LP: #1220971).
  * Improved structure and minor tweaking of many pages.

  [ Doug Smythies ]
  * ubuntu-help/
    - Added missing .png files (LP: #1245031).
    - Clarify disk usage analyzer (LP: #1059535).
  * Link corrections so that yelp-check ids will pass.
    - Fixed 2 unmatched block elements: section html compile errors.
  * Some occurrences of GNOME only code and .png file requests removed
    (LP: #1232708).
  * PO files updated:
    - Exported the latest translations from Launchpad.
    - Four new languages: et, eu, tg, th.

  [ Benjamin Kerensa ]
  * Update of the MAINTAINERS file.
  * Minor tweaks.

  [ Gunnar Hjalmarsson ]
  * The group "Add & remove software" highlighted on by
    creation of the guide page Related links tweaking.
    - Added description of how you can disable the guest session
      feature (LP: #1076740).
  * Creation of
    - Rewritten to reflect the "System Settings -> Text Entry" design
      (LP: #1242626).
    - Sections "Compose key" and "Input methods" removed.
  * debian/control:
    - Bump Standards-Version to 3.9.5.
  * Updated ubuntu-help.pot.

  [ Greg Beam ]
  * The "Online accounts" pages improved, including:
    - Grammar fixes on (LP: #1220983).
    - Removal of (LP: #1220971).
    - System settings steps worded as on other pages (LP: #1268775).
    - Grammar fix (LP: #1222288).
  * Fixed validation errors (LP: #1268834).
  * Note style corrected (changed from "info" to "tip", LP: #1269100).

  [ Jeffery To ]
    - Instructions for re-enabling hibernation updated (LP: #1232814).

  [ Shaun McCance ]
  * html/ubuntu.xsl:
    - Link trail no longer needs override (LP: #1275818).
  * Changes to pass strict validation (LP: #1275866).
 -- Gunnar Hjalmarsson <email address hidden> Fri, 14 Feb 2014 18:07:00 +0100

Changed in ubuntu-docs (Ubuntu):
status: Fix Committed → Fix Released
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