grammar and icon fixes

Bug #654168 reported by Andrew
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Affects Status Importance Assigned to Milestone
ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu (Ubuntu)
In Progress
Low
Dylan McCall

Bug Description

This branch linked fixes two wording/grammar problems and updates icons in the ubuntu slideshow so that they are not blurry and are all in the same style (as well as optimized).

From:
At the heart of Ubuntu's philosophy is the belief that computing is for everyone. With advanced accessibility tools and hundreds of options like your preferred fonts, color schemes and languages, Ubuntu provides the flexibility to fit real people, whoever they are.
To:
At the heart of Ubuntu's philosophy is the belief that computing is for everyone. With advanced accessibility tools and options to change your preferred fonts, color schemes and languages, Ubuntu provides the flexibility to accommodate real people - whoever they are.

From:
Ubuntu is designed to be easy and safe, so don't hesitate to explore! If you have any questions, try the Help menu in most applications or <a href="http://www.ubuntu.com/support">ubuntu.com/support</a> to explore your other options. We hope you enjoy Ubuntu.
To:
Ubuntu is designed to be easy to use and safe, so don't hesitate to explore! If you have any questions, try the Help menu in most applications or <a href="http://www.ubuntu.com/support">ubuntu.com/support</a> to explore your other options. We hope you enjoy Ubuntu.

Attached is a comparison image of all the icons.

Tags: slides ubuntu
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Andrew (and471) wrote :
Changed in ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu:
importance: Undecided → Low
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Dylan McCall (dylanmccall) wrote :

Those icons look really good. Nice, balanced and consistent. Thank you!
I'll see about putting those in.

Where does that Gwibber icon come from?

We can't change any strings at this point since the existing ones have been thoroughly translated at this point, so that bit will have to sit for now. Assuming the slideshow for 11.04 is similar (which I'm pretty sure it will be), those suggestions will be useful. I certainly agree with you for the first one :)
Well, mostly. “Fit” isn't great, but “Accommodate” sounds like accessibility again. I was hoping to move the slide away from that, towards customisation (in a way that appeals to everyone) with accessibility being a natural side-effect. Maybe other people feel differently about it…

(One thing, though: “-” should be “&mdash” for the sake of accurate typography)

Changed in ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu:
assignee: nobody → Dylan McCall (dylanmccall)
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Andrew (and471) wrote :

Cool that sounds fine Dylan. I just made the gwibber icon quickly based on the large original :)

Changed in ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu:
status: New → In Progress
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Dylan McCall (dylanmccall) wrote :

Okay! I made a new branch cherry-picking your icons (lp:~dylanmccall/ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu/polished-icons) and fixing a couple others. Filed a freeze exception request (bug #538411).

I LOVE your Gwibber icon, but I'm going to leave it out for now for the sake of consistency. Have you sent that to the Gwibber people, by chance?

Leaving this open since the grammar things stand. (Unfortunately, I haven't engaged in the necessary sorting to have a branch for 11.04 going yet).

Thanks again!

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Dylan McCall (dylanmccall) wrote :

Oops, that freeze exception request is bug #654904 :)

Changed in ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu:
milestone: none → narwhal
tags: added: slides ubuntu
affects: ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu → ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu (Ubuntu)
Changed in ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu (Ubuntu):
milestone: natty-final → none
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