grammar and icon fixes
Affects | Status | Importance | Assigned to | Milestone | |
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ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu (Ubuntu) |
In Progress
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Low
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Dylan McCall |
Bug Description
This branch linked fixes two wording/grammar problems and updates icons in the ubuntu slideshow so that they are not blurry and are all in the same style (as well as optimized).
From:
At the heart of Ubuntu's philosophy is the belief that computing is for everyone. With advanced accessibility tools and hundreds of options like your preferred fonts, color schemes and languages, Ubuntu provides the flexibility to fit real people, whoever they are.
To:
At the heart of Ubuntu's philosophy is the belief that computing is for everyone. With advanced accessibility tools and options to change your preferred fonts, color schemes and languages, Ubuntu provides the flexibility to accommodate real people - whoever they are.
From:
Ubuntu is designed to be easy and safe, so don't hesitate to explore! If you have any questions, try the Help menu in most applications or <a href="http://
To:
Ubuntu is designed to be easy to use and safe, so don't hesitate to explore! If you have any questions, try the Help menu in most applications or <a href="http://
Attached is a comparison image of all the icons.
Related branches
Changed in ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu: | |
status: | New → In Progress |
Changed in ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu: | |
milestone: | none → narwhal |
tags: | added: slides ubuntu |
affects: | ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu → ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu (Ubuntu) |
Changed in ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu (Ubuntu): | |
milestone: | natty-final → none |
Those icons look really good. Nice, balanced and consistent. Thank you!
I'll see about putting those in.
Where does that Gwibber icon come from?
We can't change any strings at this point since the existing ones have been thoroughly translated at this point, so that bit will have to sit for now. Assuming the slideshow for 11.04 is similar (which I'm pretty sure it will be), those suggestions will be useful. I certainly agree with you for the first one :)
Well, mostly. “Fit” isn't great, but “Accommodate” sounds like accessibility again. I was hoping to move the slide away from that, towards customisation (in a way that appeals to everyone) with accessibility being a natural side-effect. Maybe other people feel differently about it…
(One thing, though: “-” should be “&mdash” for the sake of accurate typography)