"Sleep started" probably should be "Going to sleep"
"Sleep failed" -> "Couldn't sleep"
"Failed to sleep" -> "Couldn't sleep, clowns were eating me"
"Failure to sleep" -> "Can't sleep, clowns will eat me" (not really)
"The battery is critically low, so the " has a stray space before "is". (My fault, sorry.)
And from the since-you're-changing-it-anyway department:
"Computer will" -> "The computer will" (2x)
"this computer" -> "the computer" (4 more)
"below the critical level" -> "critically low" (4 more)
"Sleep started" probably should be "Going to sleep"
"Sleep failed" -> "Couldn't sleep"
"Failed to sleep" -> "Couldn't sleep, clowns were eating me"
"Failure to sleep" -> "Can't sleep, clowns will eat me" (not really)
"The battery is critically low, so the " has a stray space before "is". (My fault, sorry.)
And from the since-you' re-changing- it-anyway department:
"Computer will" -> "The computer will" (2x)
"this computer" -> "the computer" (4 more)
"below the critical level" -> "critically low" (4 more)
The rest of the patch looks good. Thanks!