Comment 2 for bug 531491

Matthew Paul Thomas (mpt) wrote :

"Sleep started" probably should be "Going to sleep"
"Sleep failed" -> "Couldn't sleep"
"Failed to sleep" -> "Couldn't sleep, clowns were eating me"
"Failure to sleep" -> "Can't sleep, clowns will eat me" (not really)

"The battery is critically low, so the " has a stray space before "is". (My fault, sorry.)

And from the since-you're-changing-it-anyway department:
"Computer will" -> "The computer will" (2x)
"this computer" -> "the computer" (4 more)
"below the critical level" -> "critically low" (4 more)

The rest of the patch looks good. Thanks!