wording in oo-about-these-files.odt
Affects | Status | Importance | Assigned to | Milestone | |
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example-content (Ubuntu) |
Fix Released
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Wishlist
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Unassigned |
Bug Description
Binary package hint: example-content
"The former South African president Nelson Mandela explains the concept of 'ubuntu'" sounds like it's saying that Nelson Mandela is no longer South African. Also 'president' is being used as a title and should probably be capitalized.
How about:
"Former President of South Africa Nelson Mandela explains the concept of 'ubuntu'."
or
"Nelson Mandela, former President of South Africa, explains the concept of 'ubuntu'."
or even just getting rid of the the leading 'the' helps:
"Former South African President Nelson Mandela explains the concept of 'ubuntu'."
though that looks funny because the sentence starts with 6 consecutive capitalized words. Okay, now I'm nitpicking.
Related branches
Changed in example-content: | |
importance: | Undecided → Wishlist |
status: | New → Confirmed |
If I can add another error here instead of opening a new bug:
The last sentence of the first paragraph is "Simply click on a file's icon or thumbnail to open it for viewing or editing in it's default application." That should be "Simply click on a file's icon or thumbnail to open it for viewing or editing in its default application.", as it's is short for "it is" not its.