Spelling and Grammar Errors in Control file
Affects | Status | Importance | Assigned to | Milestone | |
---|---|---|---|---|---|
One Hundred Papercuts |
Fix Released
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Low
|
Unassigned | ||
alien-arena (Ubuntu) |
Fix Released
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Low
|
Unassigned |
Bug Description
1. Open the Ubuntu Software Center
2. Search for Alien Arena
3. Click the 'More Info' button
There are some spelling and grammar errors in the description:
deathmatch = death-match
32 bit = 32-bit
hi resolution = hi-resolution
hi poly = hi-poly
For the description I think it might be better to add some commas to break up the long sentences.
I suggest:
"ALIEN ARENA is a standalone 3D first person online death-match shooter
crafted from the original source code of Quake II and Quake III, released
by id Software under the GPL license. With features including 32-bit
graphics, a new particle engine and effects, light blooms, reflective water,
hi-resolution textures and skins, and hi-poly models and stain maps, ALIEN ARENA
pushes the envelope of graphical beauty rivalling today's top games."
I will add a patch to this report and push my suggestions up to launchpad.
Thanks
Paul
ProblemType: Bug
DistroRelease: Ubuntu 11.04
Package: alien-arena (not installed)
ProcVersionSign
Uname: Linux 2.6.38-11-generic x86_64
Architecture: amd64
Date: Thu Aug 25 20:42:21 2011
InstallationMedia: Ubuntu 11.04 "Natty Narwhal" - Release amd64 (20110427.1)
ProcEnviron:
LANGUAGE=en_US:en
LANG=en_US.UTF-8
SHELL=/bin/bash
SourcePackage: alien-arena
UpgradeStatus: No upgrade log present (probably fresh install)
Related branches
- Brian Murray: Disapprove
- Ubuntu branches: Pending requested
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Diff: 35 lines (+8/-8)1 file modifieddebian/control (+8/-8)
Changed in alien-arena (Ubuntu): | |
status: | New → Confirmed |
Changed in hundredpapercuts: | |
milestone: | none → precise-8-softwarecenter-app-descriptions |
status: | New → Confirmed |
importance: | Undecided → Low |
Changed in hundredpapercuts: | |
milestone: | precise-8-softwarecenter-app-descriptions → quantal-3-software-centre-app-metadata |
I'm not certain all those words, specifically 32 bit and deathmatch, really need hyphens in them.