http://www.ubuntu.com/ubuntu/TrademarkPolicy errata

[Jenda Vančura]

http://www.ubuntu.com/ubuntu/TrademarkPolicy

Ubuntu Trademark Usage Policy:

  "Before using the any of these marks"
should be
  "Before using any of these marks"

  "(such as using these in a review to refer to the product)"
Repetitive use of the word 'these', I would replace with:
  "(such as use in reviews or when referring to the product)"

  "As long as you follow the Logo Standards listed below, you do not need to contact us if:"
This refers to Logo Standards listed _far_ below, and there is a list of bullets following the 'if' here, which can be confusing. I propose:
  "As long as you follow the Logo Standards listed at the bottom of this page, ... "
Furthermore, the 'if' is followed by a list of these three things:
    * You want to use the logo in a desktop background. Go right ahead! You can even share your work by listing it on our artwork page.
    * Logos can be found here.
    * You want to link to our website from your site. Buttons can be found here.
Here, obviously the "Logos can be found here." doesn't belong to the 'if' at all and doesn't deserve a seperate bullet. I propose:
    * You want to use the logo in a desktop background. Go right ahead! You can even share your work by listing it on our artwork page. Logos can be found here.
    * You want to link to our website from your site. Buttons can be found here.

  "please contact us."
I believe this would serve the purpose better:
  "please contact us at the above email address."
or
  "please contact un at <email address hidden>"

[Jenda Vančura (jenda)]

I meant "please contact us at <email address hidden>", not "please contact un at <email address hidden>"

[Matthew East (mdke)]

Fixed, thanks.