"Bookmarks" as a reference to the objects should be "bookmarks", p.58

Bug #585931 reported by Marc Stewart on 2010-05-26
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Ubuntu Manual
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Jason Cook

Bug Description

Rev. 788
Ch. 3, § "Bookmarks", p. 58 (PDF p. 60)
Types: capitalisation; style

Manual has:
In Firefox, you can create Bookmarks, which are saved in the web browser and which you can use to navigate back to your picked web pages.

"Bookmarks" is also italicised, which is sufficient emphasis. It is not a proper noun so it shouldn't be capitalised too.

Also, there's the repetition of "which", and use of "picked".

Suggestion:
In Firefox, you can create bookmarks that are saved in the web browser, and which you can use to navigate back to those web pages.

Changed in ubuntu-manual:
status: New → Fix Committed
assignee: nobody → Jason.Cook599 (jason-cook599)
Changed in ubuntu-manual:
status: Fix Committed → Fix Released
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