Multiple networks p.47

Bug #585827 reported by Marc Stewart
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Ubuntu Manual
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Bug Description

Rev. 788
Ch. 3, § "Connecting to a saved wireless network", p. 47 (PDF p. 49)
Type: style

Manual has:
If you have multiple saved wireless networks in range, Ubuntu may choose to connect to one of them, while you may prefer to connect to another.

This isn't really wrong, but I think the wording can be improved. The less technically inclined say "many" rather than "multiple".

If there are many saved wireless networks in range, Ubuntu may choose to connect to one of them, even though you may prefer to connect to another.

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Ross (rossmasters) wrote :

That sounds better to me, also I think that adding "[that are] in range" would flow better.

E.g:

"If you have many saved wireless networks that are in range, Ubuntu may choose to connect to one of them, while you may prefer to connect to another."

Changed in ubuntu-manual:
importance: Undecided → Low
status: New → Confirmed
Ross (rossmasters)
Changed in ubuntu-manual:
status: Confirmed → Fix Committed
Changed in ubuntu-manual:
status: Fix Committed → Fix Released
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