"Signal meter" missing "a" on p.46

Bug #585446 reported by Marc Stewart on 2010-05-25
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Ubuntu Manual
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Kevin Godby

Bug Description

Rev. 788
Ch. 3, § "Connecting to a wireless network for the first time", p. 46 (PDF p. 48)
Type: grammar

"A" needed before "signal meter":
[...] if it connects successfully will then change to display [a] signal meter.

Might also be better as two separate sentences:
The NetworkManager icon in the top panel will animate as Ubuntu attempts to establish a connection. If it connects successfully, the icon will change to display a signal meter.

Kevin Godby (godbyk) on 2010-05-25
Changed in ubuntu-manual:
assignee: nobody → Kevin Godby (godbyk)
status: New → In Progress
milestone: none → edition-2
Kevin Godby (godbyk) wrote :

Thanks! I've fixed this for the second edition.

Changed in ubuntu-manual:
status: In Progress → Fix Committed
Changed in ubuntu-manual:
status: Fix Committed → Fix Released
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