Comma splice on p.35

Bug #585403 reported by Marc Stewart on 2010-05-25
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Affects Status Importance Assigned to Milestone
Ubuntu Manual
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Kevin Godby

Bug Description

Rev. 788
Ch. 2, § "Desktop background", p. 35 (PDF p. 37)
Type: grammar

Manual has a comma splice (before "however"):
Here you will see Ubuntu’s default selection of backgrounds, however, if you have your own pictures stored on your computer
you can use these as well.

Suggestion for rewrite involving following sentences:
Here you will see Ubuntu’s default selection of backgrounds. To change the background simply click the picture
you would like to use. You're not limited to this selection though. To use one of your own pictures, click the Add... button, and navigate to the image you want.

Kevin Godby (godbyk) on 2010-05-25
Changed in ubuntu-manual:
assignee: nobody → Kevin Godby (godbyk)
milestone: none → edition-2
status: New → In Progress
Kevin Godby (godbyk) wrote :

I've fixed this in the second edition. Thanks!

Changed in ubuntu-manual:
status: In Progress → Fix Committed
Changed in ubuntu-manual:
status: Fix Committed → Fix Released
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