Comma splice on p.34 & Suggestions for rewrite
Bug #585397 reported by
Marc Stewart
This bug affects 1 person
Affects | Status | Importance | Assigned to | Milestone | |
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Ubuntu Manual |
Fix Released
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Undecided
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Kevin Godby |
Bug Description
Rev. 788
Ch. 2, § "Theme", p. 34 (PDF p.36)
Types: grammar, suggestions
Manual has:
The theme called “Ambiance” is enabled by default, however, you will see there are seven other default themes to choose from in the list.
There is a comma splice before "however" here.
"Enabled" has the wrong connotation. "Used" is more appropriate.
"In the list" would probably be better earlier in the sentence, if used at all.
Suggestion:
The "Ambiance" theme is used by default, but there are seven other themes you can choose from. Just click once on the theme you want to try, and the changes will take effect immediately.
Related branches
Changed in ubuntu-manual: | |
assignee: | nobody → Kevin Godby (godbyk) |
status: | New → In Progress |
milestone: | none → edition-2 |
Changed in ubuntu-manual: | |
status: | Fix Committed → Fix Released |
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I've fixed this in the second edition. Thanks!