Superfluous comma before "and" on p.34
Bug #585380 reported by
Marc Stewart
This bug affects 1 person
| Affects | Status | Importance | Assigned to | Milestone | |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Ubuntu Manual |
Fix Released
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Undecided
|
Kevin Godby | ||
Bug Description
Rev. 788
Ch. 2, § "Workspaces", p. 34 (PDF p. 36)
Type: grammar
Manual has:
In this case you can still change between workspaces by moving the mouse over the workspace switcher, and scrolling the mouse wheel.
Moving the mouse over the workspace switcher and scrolling the mouse comprise a single action, not a list of options, so there shouldn't be a comma separating them, although one after "in this case" wouldn't hurt:
In this case, you can still change between workspaces by moving the mouse over the workspace switcher and scrolling the mouse wheel.
Related branches
| Changed in ubuntu-manual: | |
| assignee: | nobody → Kevin Godby (godbyk) |
| status: | New → In Progress |
| milestone: | none → edition-2 |
Revision history for this message
| Kevin Godby (godbyk) wrote | #1 |
| Changed in ubuntu-manual: | |
| status: | In Progress → Fix Committed |
| Changed in ubuntu-manual: | |
| status: | Fix Committed → Fix Released |
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I've fixed this in the second edition. Thanks!