Superfluous comma before "and" on p.34

Bug #585380 reported by Marc Stewart on 2010-05-25
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Ubuntu Manual
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Kevin Godby

Bug Description

Rev. 788
Ch. 2, § "Workspaces", p. 34 (PDF p. 36)
Type: grammar

Manual has:
In this case you can still change between workspaces by moving the mouse over the workspace switcher, and scrolling the mouse wheel.

Moving the mouse over the workspace switcher and scrolling the mouse comprise a single action, not a list of options, so there shouldn't be a comma separating them, although one after "in this case" wouldn't hurt:

In this case, you can still change between workspaces by moving the mouse over the workspace switcher and scrolling the mouse wheel.

Kevin Godby (godbyk) on 2010-05-25
Changed in ubuntu-manual:
assignee: nobody → Kevin Godby (godbyk)
status: New → In Progress
milestone: none → edition-2
Kevin Godby (godbyk) wrote :

I've fixed this in the second edition. Thanks!

Changed in ubuntu-manual:
status: In Progress → Fix Committed
Changed in ubuntu-manual:
status: Fix Committed → Fix Released
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