People can be referred to with "who" instead of "that"

Bug #585295 reported by Marc Stewart on 2010-05-25
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This bug affects 1 person
Affects Status Importance Assigned to Milestone
Ubuntu Manual
Undecided
Kevin Godby

Bug Description

Rev. 788
Ch. 1, § "Require my password to login, p. 19 (PDF p. 21)
Type: rewording suggestion

Manual has:
This is a good option for those that, for example, share their computer with other family members.

Since "those" refers to people, "who" could be used instead of "that":
This is a good option for those who, for example, share their computer with other family members.

I have no objection to this being marked "Won't Fix" since there isn't anything *wrong* with the current wording, but I think "who" flows better and is more specific for translation and readers with second-language English.

Kevin Godby (godbyk) on 2010-05-25
Changed in ubuntu-manual:
assignee: nobody → Kevin Godby (godbyk)
milestone: none → edition-2
status: New → In Progress
Kevin Godby (godbyk) wrote :

This fix will appear in the second edition. Thanks!

Changed in ubuntu-manual:
status: In Progress → Fix Committed
Changed in ubuntu-manual:
status: Fix Committed → Fix Released
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