Comma splice on p.19

Bug #585292 reported by Marc Stewart on 2010-05-25
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Affects Status Importance Assigned to Milestone
Ubuntu Manual
Undecided
Chris Woollard

Bug Description

Rev. 788
Ch.1, § "Log in automatically", p. 19 (PDF p. 21)
Type: grammar

Manual has a comma splice (before "however"):
This makes your login experience quicker and more convenient, however, if privacy or security are important to you, this option is not recommended.

Either the comma before "however" should be a full stop or semicolon, or the appropriate conjunction, "but", should be employed:
This makes your login experience quicker and more convenient, but if privacy or security are important to you, this option is not recommended.

Changed in ubuntu-manual:
assignee: nobody → Chris Woollard (cwoollard)
status: New → In Progress
status: In Progress → Fix Committed
Changed in ubuntu-manual:
milestone: none → edition-2
Changed in ubuntu-manual:
status: Fix Committed → Fix Released
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