P.9: Comma needed before "called GNOME"
Bug #584964 reported by
Marc Stewart
This bug affects 1 person
Affects | Status | Importance | Assigned to | Milestone | |
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Ubuntu Manual |
Invalid
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Undecided
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Kevin Godby |
Bug Description
Rev. 788
Prologue: What is Linux? section (p.9, PDF p.11)
Type: grammar
Final sentence needs a comma:
"and uses one of the more popular graphical desktop environments[,] called GNOME."
Without it the sentence suggests that there are several desktop environments called GNOME; ignoring versions, there's only one, isn't there?
Changed in ubuntu-manual: | |
assignee: | nobody → Kevin Godby (godbyk) |
status: | New → In Progress |
milestone: | none → edition-2 |
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There's no need for a comma there.