Awkward wording on page 10 under contact details

Bug #584636 reported by Mo-Yu Mandy Zhou
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Ubuntu Manual

Bug Description

Version: 788
Chapter and page number: Prologue, p. 10 (p. 12 of the PDF)
Type: style/grammar

The first line under 'Contact details' reads "Many people have contributed their time freely [...]". This sounds a little awkward; perhaps "Many people have freely contributed their time" would be an improvement.

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ilya haykinson (haykinson) wrote :

removed "freely" altogether; that's clear given "contributed"

Changed in ubuntu-manual:
status: New → In Progress
Changed in ubuntu-manual:
status: In Progress → Fix Committed
Changed in ubuntu-manual:
status: Fix Committed → Fix Released
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