Incorrect usage of the word 'where' on page 10
Bug #584634 reported by
Mo-Yu Mandy Zhou
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Bug Description
Version: 788
Chapter and page number: Prologue, p. 10 (p. 12 of the PDF)
Type: usage/grammar
The first line of the first paragraph reads "[...] largest market, where they can make the most profit [...]"; the word 'where' is used incorrectly and awkwardly here. More appropriate is the phrase 'in which'.
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status: | In Progress → Fix Committed |
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status: | Fix Committed → Fix Released |
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changed to "Game developers usually design games for the largest market, which leads to larger profits."
Though maybe the whole phrase is unnecessary -- who are we to judge game companies' motivations?