Awkward wording on page 9; rephrasing recommended

Bug #584633 reported by Mo-Yu Mandy Zhou
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Bug Description

Version: 788
Chapter and page number: Prologue, p. 9 (p. 11 of the PDF)
Type: grammar/sentence structure/style

The second sentence of the second bullet point under 'Is Ubuntu right for you?' reads "For the vast majority of tasks that people use their computers for every day [...]", which sounds rather awkward. An alternative is "For the vast majority of everyday tasks that computer use facilitates [...]".

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ilya haykinson (haykinson) wrote :

changed to "For the vast majority of everyday computing tasks, ..."

Changed in ubuntu-manual:
status: New → In Progress
Changed in ubuntu-manual:
status: In Progress → Fix Committed
Changed in ubuntu-manual:
status: Fix Committed → Fix Released
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