"Laptop computers commonly use Wi-Fi due to their portability"

Bug #584573 reported by haydoni
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Ubuntu Manual
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ilya haykinson

Bug Description

Chapter 3, Paragraph 3, sentence 2: "Laptop computers com-
monly use Wi-Fi due to their portability,"

This sounds ambiguous (to me), one might ask if some portable laptop computers cannot use a wired connection due to their portability.

I suggest they "...due to its portability" (i.e. Wi-Fi's portability)", "...commonly use Wi-Fi to take advantage of their portability", or simply "...for portability".

Changed in ubuntu-manual:
assignee: nobody → ilya haykinson (haykinson)
Changed in ubuntu-manual:
status: New → In Progress
Changed in ubuntu-manual:
status: In Progress → Fix Committed
Changed in ubuntu-manual:
status: Fix Committed → Fix Released
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