Grammar improvement required
Bug #584492 reported by
Mark Hepworth
This bug affects 1 person
Affects | Status | Importance | Assigned to | Milestone | |
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Ubuntu Manual |
Fix Released
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Low
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Elan Kugelmass |
Bug Description
788
Chp 6 p120
Ubuntu uses the Linux file system structure based on a series of folders in
the root directory.
Not ungrammatical as such, but awkward, needing a separation between "Linux file system structure" and "based on". Also "system structure" is a bit redundant.
Suggestion: "Ubuntu uses the Linux file system, which is based on a series of folders in the root directory."
Related branches
Changed in ubuntu-manual: | |
status: | Fix Committed → Fix Released |
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