List of three is messed up (page 12)

Bug #584465 reported by Andrew
10
This bug affects 2 people
Affects Status Importance Assigned to Milestone
Ubuntu Manual
Medium
Kevin Godby

Bug Description

the below sentence is a bit messed up. By this I mean that the beginning of each item is different for each item and too confusing.
The last item seems to miss of 'have' and because the first item is a negative, the second and third positive items seem confusing. Pl

This option may be preferred if you don't have access to a CD burner, have limited bandwidth, or a slow Internet connection.

becomes

This option may be preferred if you have limited bandwidth, have a slow Internet connection, or don't have access to a CD burner.

Revision history for this message
Andrew (and471) wrote :
Revision history for this message
Mo-Yu Mandy Zhou (zhou-mandy) wrote :

A simpler fix would be to simply add 'have' before the last item (i.e. "have a slow internet connection').

Revision history for this message
Kevin Godby (godbyk) wrote :

I've used Mandy's suggestion of 'have a slow Internet connection'.

This fix will appear in the second edition. Thanks!

Changed in ubuntu-manual:
status: New → Fix Committed
importance: Undecided → Medium
assignee: nobody → Kevin Godby (godbyk)
milestone: none → edition-2
Changed in ubuntu-manual:
status: Fix Committed → Fix Released
To post a comment you must log in.
This report contains Public information  Edit
Everyone can see this information.

Other bug subscribers