Comma neded (page 9)
Bug #584455 reported by
Andrew
This bug affects 1 person
| Affects | Status | Importance | Assigned to | Milestone | |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Ubuntu Manual |
Invalid
|
Low
|
Kevin Godby | ||
Bug Description
There should be a comma before 'cellphones' on page 9, as micro-computers and cellphones are grouped together (small devices)
One of the benefits of Linux is that it is incredibly flexible
and can be configured to run on almost any device—from the smallest micro-
computers and cellphones[,] to larger super-computers.
Revision history for this message
| Andrew (and471) wrote | #1 |
Revision history for this message
| Kevin Godby (godbyk) wrote | #2 |
| Changed in ubuntu-manual: | |
| status: | New → Incomplete |
| importance: | Undecided → Low |
| assignee: | nobody → Kevin Godby (godbyk) |
| milestone: | none → edition-2 |
| status: | Incomplete → Invalid |
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The 'and' is strong enough to adjoin microcomputers and cellphones. The comma disrupts the 'from...to' phrase.
Can you cite a grammar rule that suggests a comma is required?