Some style changes to the prologue

Bug #508951 reported by ilya haykinson on 2010-01-17
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Bug Description

Attached is a patch for some style change suggestions to the prologue:

 - changed instances of "Ubuntu Manual Team" and related instances to "we", and introduced the team as "we"
 - changed passive voice into active voice in a few places
 - added some line breaks in long lines
 - changed "hundreds of thousands" to "millions" (of Ubuntu users), which is more accurate

ilya haykinson (haykinson) wrote :
ilya haykinson (haykinson) wrote :

Patch applied, as per Benjamin's comments in IRC.

Changed in ubuntu-manual:
status: New → Fix Released
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