Some document format errors in the "Tricircle Design Blueprint"

Bug #1657624 reported by Dongfeng Huang
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This bug affects 1 person
Affects Status Importance Assigned to Milestone
Tricircle
Fix Released
Undecided
Prince Nana Owusu Boateng

Bug Description

There are some minor document format errors in the the Tricircle Design Blueprint:
the blueprint link is:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1zcxwl8xMEpxVCqLTce2-dUOtB-ObmzJTbV1uSQ6qTsY/edit#

error 1:
in the section 3.1.1, the description of "openstack" should be "OpenStack".(this bug had been reported by Shinobu but not fixed yet.)
location: the second line of this section.
for example: A new openstack instance

error 2:
the title 3.1.1 is not in the same level with 3.1.2~3.1.5.

error 3:
in the section 3.1.3, the description of "instance" should be "instances".
location: the second line of this section.
for example: OpenStack instance will be put in DMZ zone

error 4:
section 5 is omitted. section 6 is directly behind the section 4.

error 5:
in the section 6.1, the sub-item behind the "Robust" is not needed. it is explanation of "Robust".
location: the sixth line of this section.
for example: Robust system from each components layer to realize high reliability

error 6:
in the section 6.2. the description of "serve" should be "serves".
location: the third line of this section "Tricircle Local Neutron Plugin".
for example: The Tricircle Local Neutron Plugin serve for cross Neutron networking

error 7:
in the section 6.2, the description of "serve" should be "serves".
location: the third line of this section "Tricircle Central Neutron Plugin".
for example: The Tricircle Central Neutron Plugin serve for tenant level L2/L3 networking

error 8:
in the section 6.3.1, the description of "naturally" should be "natural". (I'm not sure.)
location: the beginning of the third paragraph in "Key challenges".
for example: it's quite naturally to consider reuse Neutron for these

error 9:
in the section 6.3.3, the "." behind the async should be removed.
the description of "lead" should be "leads".
location: in the Use case 1, the end of the first paragraph. the same place
for "lead".
for example: in compute node is async. operation and lead to better user experiences

error 10:
there are two section 6.4.

error 11:
in the first section 6.4, the blank space in "instances / volumes" should be removed.
location: the third line in AZ part of this section.
for example: placement like instances / volumes will be based on AZ. In Neutron API,

error 12:
in the first section 6.4, the description of "Openstack" should be "OpenStack"
location: the first line in Pod part of this section.
for example: A local Openstack cloud instance in which the local Neutron is installed

error 13:
title 6.7.1 is not in the same level with 6.7.2.

error 14:
section 7 is lost, section 8 is directly behind section 6.

Changed in tricircle:
assignee: nobody → Prince Nana Owusu Boateng (nanaboat)
baisen (song1)
Changed in tricircle:
status: New → Fix Released
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