Chapter 41. Sentence rewording
Affects | Status | Importance | Assigned to | Milestone | |
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openstack-manuals |
Fix Released
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Low
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Andreas Jaeger |
Bug Description
There is a heading immediately above, and this only loosely relates, we can start with a more on-topic sentence, as well as combining superfluous and awkward sentences
Doc Currently Reads: "One classic security principle is to remove any unused components from your system. QEMU provides support for many different virtual hardware devices. However, only a small number of devices are needed for a given instance. Most instances will use the virtio devices. However, some legacy instances will need access to specific hardware, which can be specified using glance metadata:"
Recommended change: "The first recommendation is to minimize the QEMU code base by removing unused components from the system. QEMU provides support for many different virtual hardware devices, however only a small number of devices are needed for a given instance; the most common of which is the virtio device. Some legacy instances will need access to specific hardware, which can be specified using glance metadata:"
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Built: 2014-07-15T19:04:59 00:00
git SHA: f7711cc343e5042
URL: http://
source File: file:/home/
xml:id: hardening-
Changed in openstack-manuals: | |
status: | New → Confirmed |
importance: | Undecided → Low |
Changed in openstack-manuals: | |
assignee: | nobody → Shellee Arnold (shellee-arnold) |
Changed in openstack-manuals: | |
assignee: | Shellee Arnold (shellee-arnold) → Andreas Jaeger (jaegerandi) |
Fix proposed to branch: master /review. openstack. org/118234
Review: https:/