Colloquial language

Bug #1494554 reported by Brian Moss
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Affects Status Importance Assigned to Milestone
openstack-manuals
Fix Released
Wishlist
Deena Cooper

Bug Description

In the Example Architecture section, the phrase "choose your own OpenStack adventure" is colloquial.

I suggest rewording:

"This guide presents several combinations of core and optional services for you to choose from."

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Release: 0.1 on 2015-09-10 21:31
SHA: 83f45d3066da90b602203e82618afad7f4ac87a8
Source: http://git.openstack.org/cgit/openstack/openstack-manuals/tree/doc/install-guide/source/overview.rst
URL: http://docs.openstack.org/draft/install-guide-rdo/overview.html

Changed in openstack-manuals:
status: New → Confirmed
importance: Undecided → Wishlist
Deena Cooper (deenac)
Changed in openstack-manuals:
assignee: Brian Moss (bmoss) → Deena Cooper (deenac)
Revision history for this message
OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack) wrote : Fix proposed to openstack-manuals (master)

Fix proposed to branch: master
Review: https://review.openstack.org/222491

Changed in openstack-manuals:
status: Confirmed → In Progress
Revision history for this message
OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack) wrote : Fix merged to openstack-manuals (master)

Reviewed: https://review.openstack.org/222491
Committed: https://git.openstack.org/cgit/openstack/openstack-manuals/commit/?id=417752ef96330af3bee4a463f78d6bff55d4b857
Submitter: Jenkins
Branch: master

commit 417752ef96330af3bee4a463f78d6bff55d4b857
Author: Deena <email address hidden>
Date: Fri Sep 11 16:53:03 2015 +1000

    Removed colloquialism

    Removed colloquialism "choose your own OpenStack adventure".

    Change-Id: I799320af01e5bcf295ec88c9d3fcb22a16352cda
    Closes-Bug: #1494554

Changed in openstack-manuals:
status: In Progress → Fix Released
Revision history for this message
OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack) wrote : Fix included in openstack/openstack-manuals 15.0.0

This issue was fixed in the openstack/openstack-manuals 15.0.0 release.

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