Security Guide - Chapter 43. Instance migrations, commas, and hyphens

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Cleaning up some punctuation as well as breaking up a run-on sentence

Currently States: " OpenStack and the underlying virtualization layers provide for the live migration of images between OpenStack nodes allowing you to seamlessly perform rolling upgrades of your OpenStack compute nodes without instance downtime. However, live migrations also come with their fair share of risk. To understand the risks involved, it is important to first understand how a live migration works. The following are the high level steps preformed during a live migration."

Recommended Update: " OpenStack and the underlying virtualization layers provide for the live migration of images between OpenStack nodes, allowing you to seamlessly perform rolling upgrades of your OpenStack compute nodes without instance downtime. However, live migrations also carry significant risk. To understand the risks involved, the following are the high-level steps preformed during a live migration."
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Fix proposed to branch: master
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Reviewed: https://review.openstack.org/109670
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commit b3b880f871aaf208dc57ca5cf37daebfd3371f7a
Author: Andreas Steil <email address hidden>
Date: Fri Jul 25 20:09:35 2014 +0200

    Security Guide: Instance migrations: Some cleaning up

    Cleaning up some punctuation as well as breaking up a run-on sentence
    and fixing a typo.

    Closes-Bug: #1344348

    Change-Id: I26d972e372354105263a6613137c234cc0e2be5d