Grammatical errors - Chapter 45. Forensics and incident response in OpenStack Security Guide

[Shellee Aragon]

The term is describes present tense, in the sentence below are should be used in lieu of is:

Monitoring events is more pro-active and provides real-time detection and response.

The term last is awkward in this context and should be replaced with latter:

The last stems from wanting to be elastic, to scale to the dynamic needs of the users.

Ambiguity in this sentence following the use of "etc":

These use cases can be implemented and monitored through various commercial and open source tools, homegrown scripts, etc.

Potential revision:
These use cases can be implemented and monitored through various commercial or open source scripts( in-house), applications or other tooling.

Grammatical errors:
These tools and scripts can generate events that can then be sent to the administrators through email or integrated dashboard.

Proposed revision:
The tools and scripts can generate events that can be sent to the administrators through email or integrated dashboard.

Improper use of punctuation:

OS events on the OpenStack service machines such as user logins, restarts also provide valuable insight into use/misuse

The comma should be the conjunction "and":

OS events on the OpenStack service machines such as user logins and restarts also provide valuable insight into use/misuse

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Fix proposed to branch: master
Review: https://review.openstack.org/116545

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Reviewed: https://review.openstack.org/116545
Committed: https://git.openstack.org/cgit/openstack/security-doc/commit/?id=55fffd4b50e5add25be3c6d999ed3838608bb0d8
Submitter: Jenkins
Branch: master

commit 55fffd4b50e5add25be3c6d999ed3838608bb0d8
Author: Shellee Arnold <email address hidden>
Date: Sun Aug 24 21:16:23 2014 -0700

    Grammatical errors in CH.45 - Forensics and Incident Response.

    Made multiple corrections in passage to remediate grammatical errors.
    Fix itemizedlists, remove extraneous markup.
    Remove one useage of etc
    Wrap overlong paragraphs.

    Co-Authored-By: Andreas Jaeger <email address hidden>
    Closes-Bug: #1342968
    Change-Id: I4f9d92b8db3068004ec4e72ecbdae88f2884ddd0