Overuse of conjunctions - Chapter 45. Forensics and incident response in OpenStack Security Guide

[Shellee Aragon]

Multiple instances of "or" unnecessarily used:

On detection, further action may be to black list an IP, or recommend strengthening user passwords, or even de-activating a user account if it is deemed dormant.

Proposed revision:
Actions may be taken to mitigate potential malicious activity detected such as black listing an IP address, recommendations of strengthening user passwords, or in some cases de-activating a user account if it is deemed dormant.
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URL: http://docs.openstack.org/security-guide/content/forensics-and-incident-response.html
source File: file:/home/jenkins/workspace/security-doc-tox-doc-publishdocs/security-guide/ch_forensics-and-incident-response.xml
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Fix proposed to branch: master
Review: https://review.openstack.org/108162

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Change abandoned by Nathaniel Dillon (<email address hidden>) on branch: master
Review: https://review.openstack.org/108162
Reason: I messed up git again, will re-submit and ensure I'm not 'recommendating' anything else

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Fix proposed to branch: master
Review: https://review.openstack.org/108258

[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

Fix proposed to branch: master
Review: https://review.openstack.org/108883

[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

Reviewed: https://review.openstack.org/108883
Committed: https://git.openstack.org/cgit/openstack/security-doc/commit/?id=ee4ba77678e1d00181f0a7e0426b2fb58ea97d22
Submitter: Jenkins
Branch: master

commit ee4ba77678e1d00181f0a7e0426b2fb58ea97d22
Author: sicarie <email address hidden>
Date: Sun Jul 20 13:07:46 2014 -0700

    Smoothing awkward sentence structure around incident response

    Made 'black list' one word
    Changed tense to 'recommending strengthening of'
    Removed detected and in some cases

    Change-Id: Ieff654861cadeb3d355a997a59f4267a38aba401
    Closes-Bug: #1342946

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Change abandoned by Andreas Jaeger (<email address hidden>) on branch: master
Review: https://review.openstack.org/108258
Reason: This change has been merged in a different patchset:

commit ee4ba77678e1d00181f0a7e0426b2fb58ea97d22
Author: sicarie <email address hidden>
Date: Sun Jul 20 13:07:46 2014 -0700

    Smoothing awkward sentence structure around incident response

    Made 'black list' one word
    Changed tense to 'recommending strengthening of'
    Removed detected and in some cases

    Change-Id: Ieff654861cadeb3d355a997a59f4267a38aba401
    Closes-Bug: #1342946