Rephrase introduction in Chapter 40. Hypervisor selection in OpenStack Security Guide - current

[CloudDon]

1) Rephrase first sentence of intro

 Virtualization provides flexibility and other key benefits that enable cloud building

a) what other key benefits?
b) cloud building?

2)Move last sentence to one before

"Finally, securing your virtualization stack is critical to deliver on the promise of multi-tenant, either between customers in a public cloud, between business units in a private cloud, or some mixture of the two in a hybrid cloud."

3)

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[Darren Chan (dazzachan)]

The introduction has already been revised (with some typos).

[Patrick Amor (pamor)]

With respect to item 2, since this is not unique to multi-tenant I propose removing that qualifier.
Proposed into would now look like this:

Virtualization can provide flexibility, improved resource utilization, faster provisioning and other benefits that enable cloud computing. The virtualization stack can also provide isolation between guest virtual machines, however, appropriate security measures must be considered to reduce the risks associated with hypervisor breakout attacks.

Sending up for review now.

[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

Fix proposed to branch: master
Review: https://review.openstack.org/151479

[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

Reviewed: https://review.openstack.org/151479
Committed: https://git.openstack.org/cgit/openstack/security-doc/commit/?id=0a5a0a60250469bd8f85c2967ecff7d862f83236
Submitter: Jenkins
Branch: master

commit 0a5a0a60250469bd8f85c2967ecff7d862f83236
Author: Patrick Amor <email address hidden>
Date: Thu Jan 29 14:59:17 2015 -0800

    Rephrase intro to Hypervisor Selection section

    o rephrase and elaborate on key benefits of virtualization
    o removed reference to multi-tenancy since it applies to single also

    Change-Id: Icb599db0ae0984dd153094aea3362bed124d595b
    Closes-Bug: #1342929