Awkward wording - Chapter 32. Database back-end considerations in OpenStack Security Guide

[Shellee Aragon]

Awkward wording and grammatical errors in the sentence below:
While security considerations are not the only basis on which a database server must be chosen, security considerations are the only ones within the scope of this book. In practice, OpenStack only supports two database types: PostgreSQL and MySQL.

Proposed revision:
Multiple factors should be considered when deciding on a database server, however for the scope of this book only security considerations will be discussed. OpenStack supports PostgreSQL and MySQL database types.

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URL: http://docs.openstack.org/security-guide/content/database-backend-considerations.html
source File: file:/home/jenkins/workspace/security-doc-tox-doc-publishdocs/security-guide/ch_database-backend-considerations.xml
xml:id: database-backend-considerations

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Fix proposed to branch: master
Review: https://review.openstack.org/108153

[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

Reviewed: https://review.openstack.org/108153
Committed: https://git.openstack.org/cgit/openstack/security-doc/commit/?id=8713b9bab626cbbf15e811e61ef4dbfc010e389d
Submitter: Jenkins
Branch: master

commit 8713b9bab626cbbf15e811e61ef4dbfc010e389d
Author: sicarie <email address hidden>
Date: Fri Jul 18 14:43:05 2014 -0700

    Updated awkward wording and repition of 'security considerations'

    Removed repition of the phrase 'security considerations'
    Removed some unnecessary punctuation

    Change-Id: If510c177cc00e6d828a6716b7e14e869e42131ba
    Closes-Bug: #1342889