There is a heading immediately above, and this only loosely relates, we can start with a more on-topic sentence, as well as combining superfluous and awkward sentences
Doc Currently Reads: "One classic security principle is to remove any unused components from your system. QEMU provides support for many different virtual hardware devices. However, only a small number of devices are needed for a given instance. Most instances will use the virtio devices. However, some legacy instances will need access to specific hardware, which can be specified using glance metadata:"
Recommended change: "The first recommendation is to minimize the QEMU code base by removing unused components from the system. QEMU provides support for many different virtual hardware devices, however only a small number of devices are needed for a given instance; the most common of which is the virtio device. Some legacy instances will need access to specific hardware, which can be specified using glance metadata:"
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URL: http://docs.openstack.org/security-guide/content/hardening-the-virtualization-layers.html
source File: file:/home/jenkins/workspace/security-doc-tox-doc-publishdocs/security-guide/ch_hardening-the-virtualization-layers.xml
xml:id: hardening-the-virtualization-layers
Fix proposed to branch: master
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