Rewrite subsection "First thing to secure: the network" in Chapter 21. Object Storage in OpenStack Security Guide - current

[CloudDon]

Consider rewriting these two sentences:

"The first aspect of a secure architecture design for Object Storage is in the networking component."

Something like "securing Object Storage Service begins with securing the networking component"

"between the end-point client and the cloud environment."

 =>client end-point or just end-point.

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[Jim Hoagland (jim-hoagland)]

https://review.openstack.org/114331

[Jim Hoagland (jim-hoagland)]

https://review.openstack.org/114347

[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

Fix proposed to branch: master
Review: https://review.openstack.org/114378

[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

Fix proposed to branch: master
Review: https://review.openstack.org/115152

[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

Change abandoned by Jim Hoagland (<email address hidden>) on branch: master
Review: https://review.openstack.org/114331

[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

Change abandoned by Jim Hoagland (<email address hidden>) on branch: master
Review: https://review.openstack.org/114347
Reason: started fresh with https://review.openstack.org/115152

[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

Change abandoned by Jim Hoagland (<email address hidden>) on branch: master
Review: https://review.openstack.org/114378
Reason: started fresh with https://review.openstack.org/115152

[Jim Hoagland (jim-hoagland)]

Please ignore previous changes. https://review.openstack.org/115152 is the active one.

[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

Reviewed: https://review.openstack.org/115152
Committed: https://git.openstack.org/cgit/openstack/security-doc/commit/?id=bc2460b49983a8d159613e1ebd2dd15296db8f2a
Submitter: Jenkins
Branch: master

commit bc2460b49983a8d159613e1ebd2dd15296db8f2a
Author: Jim Hoagland <email address hidden>
Date: Mon Aug 18 16:39:46 2014 -0700

    Improve wording of Object Storage chapter para

    Improved the wording of the paragraph of the Object Storage chapter mentioned in 1342376 to remove ackward wording and to improve capitalization

    Change-Id: I3ee17c1c86dda8609067867a317e4ddcbeec06dc
    Closes-bug: #1342376