Redundant use of the term "and" - Chapter 4. Security boundaries and threats in OpenStack Security Guide

[Shellee Aragon]

Under the heading of Data the following paragraph has redundant use of the term "and". Also the sentence beginning with much should be re-written:

The data security domain is concerned primarily with information pertaining to the storage services within OpenStack. Much of the data that crosses this network has high integrity and confidentiality requirements and depending on the type of deployment there may also be strong availability requirements.

Potential correction:

The data security domain is concerned primarily with information pertaining to the storage services within OpenStack. Most of the data transmitted across this network requires high levels of integrity and confidentiality, in some instances, depending on the type of deployment there may also be strong availability requirements.

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[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

Fix proposed to branch: master
Review: https://review.openstack.org/114861

[OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack)]

Reviewed: https://review.openstack.org/114861
Committed: https://git.openstack.org/cgit/openstack/security-doc/commit/?id=ab55465425a68ea1107f4011b7367e1406248309
Submitter: Jenkins
Branch: master

commit ab55465425a68ea1107f4011b7367e1406248309
Author: KATO Tomoyuki <email address hidden>
Date: Mon Aug 18 09:53:07 2014 +0900

    fix redundant use of the term and

    Change-Id: I3727912f1c1bb7e58fb3e7030a86c66952be05e4
    Closes-Bug: 1342374