Nonsensical sentence - Chapter 4. Security boundaries and threats in OpenStack Security Guide
Affects | Status | Importance | Assigned to | Milestone | |
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openstack-manuals |
Fix Released
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Medium
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N Dillon |
Bug Description
The sentence below is full of grammatical errors, rendering it difficult to comprehend:
For example, some deployment topologies combine both guest and data domains onto one physical network versus others, which have these networks physically separated.
Can be re-written as:
For example, some deployment topologies may consist of a combination of domains, such as guest and data, on one physical network while other topologies have the domains separated.
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Built: 2014-07-15T06:45:32 00:00
git SHA: 46a1753b5222a02
URL: http://
source File: file:/home/
xml:id: security-
Changed in openstack-manuals: | |
status: | New → Confirmed |
importance: | Undecided → Medium |
Changed in openstack-manuals: | |
assignee: | nobody → N Dillon (sicarie) |
Fix proposed to branch: master /review. openstack. org/107856
Review: https:/