Chapter 41. Combining sentences

Bug #1342331 reported by N Dillon
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Affects Status Importance Assigned to Milestone
openstack-manuals
Fix Released
Low
N Dillon

Bug Description

"This is a potential problem in any hardware sharing scenario. The problem is specific to this scenario because it is harder to reset the state of physical hardware than virtual hardware."

These restate several already-covered topics and is choppy due to re-used words (problem, scenario) both in these sentences, and the ones before. A more descriptive change may be: This is a significant breach as it is harder to reset the state of physical hardware than virtual hardware, and can lead to additional exposure such as access to the management network.
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Built: 2014-07-15T19:04:59 00:00
git SHA: f7711cc343e504283676dfe43afae6faa9046fd7
URL: http://docs.openstack.org/security-guide/content/hardening-the-virtualization-layers.html
source File: file:/home/jenkins/workspace/security-doc-tox-doc-publishdocs/security-guide/ch_hardening-the-virtualization-layers.xml
xml:id: hardening-the-virtualization-layers

Tom Fifield (fifieldt)
Changed in openstack-manuals:
status: New → Triaged
importance: Undecided → Medium
importance: Medium → Low
N Dillon (sicarie)
Changed in openstack-manuals:
assignee: nobody → N Dillon (sicarie)
Revision history for this message
OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack) wrote : Fix proposed to security-doc (master)

Fix proposed to branch: master
Review: https://review.openstack.org/107842

Changed in openstack-manuals:
status: Triaged → In Progress
Revision history for this message
OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack) wrote : Change abandoned on security-doc (master)

Change abandoned by Nathaniel Dillon (<email address hidden>) on branch: master
Review: https://review.openstack.org/107842
Reason: Abandoning due to squashed cr coming

Revision history for this message
OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack) wrote : Fix proposed to security-doc (master)

Fix proposed to branch: master
Review: https://review.openstack.org/107856

Revision history for this message
OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack) wrote : Fix merged to security-doc (master)

Reviewed: https://review.openstack.org/107856
Committed: https://git.openstack.org/cgit/openstack/security-doc/commit/?id=2d141ac604e62bfa81080060bd975aacb6c1696e
Submitter: Jenkins
Branch: master

commit 2d141ac604e62bfa81080060bd975aacb6c1696e
Author: sicarie <email address hidden>
Date: Thu Jul 17 15:02:24 2014 -0700

    Squashing 3 small changes, mostly grammatical fixes, sentence structure, and trailing whitespace

    Combining two sentences in ch41 and clarifying risk, removing commas in ch41, and changing structure of sentence in ch4, remvoed trailing whitespace

    Closes-Bug: #1342331
    Closes-Bug: #1342328
    Closes-Bug: #1342343

    Change-Id: I041c1b640e703f8e198c26ca4c5c7235ad344c48

Changed in openstack-manuals:
status: In Progress → Fix Released
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